i18n(ja): fix mistranslation of log redaction - #23434
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The English term "log redaction" (masking sensitive data in logs) was machine- translated as ログ編集 / ログの編集, which literally means "log editing" -- a false friend that does not convey the security/masking meaning. Docs already use the correct term 秘匿化 for redaction elsewhere (tidb-cloud-auditing.md), so unify the log-redaction usage to match: ログ編集 / ログの編集 -> ログの秘匿化, 編集機能 -> 秘匿化機能, 編集済みログファイル -> 秘匿化されたログファイル. Anchors are English-derived and left unchanged (only the visible heading text and inbound link text change together). 45 changes / 18 files. Left unchanged: tidb-cloud/essential-database-audit-logging.md's "監査ログの編集" (EN: "Edit audit logging") is genuinely about editing audit-log SETTINGS, not redaction -- not a mistranslation, out of scope.
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Broader sweep beyond the ログ編集/ログの編集 heading pattern: the English verb
"redact"/"redaction" was also mistranslated as 編集 ("edit") or マスキング
("masking", a different TiDB Cloud feature name) in sentences not containing
the word ログ directly (e.g. "user data is redacted", "SQL statements are
redacted", "Data redaction" heading, "Unredact the audit log"). Unify these
to 秘匿化 as well, matching the established term.
Also fix a pre-existing missing subject particle on a touched line in
release-4.0.10.md: `security.redact-info-log` `true` に設定すると -> add が
between the two backtick terms.
23 changes / 14 files: scheduling-configuration-file.md, tso-configuration-file.md,
system-variables.md, identify-slow-queries.md, several releases/*.md,
tidb-cloud/essential-database-audit-logging.md (heading anchor #data-redaction kept;
its genuine "Edit audit logging"/"Edit a filter rule" sections are untouched),
tidb-cloud/ticloud-serverless-audit-log-config-update.md (--unredacted flag
description). Left unchanged: tidb-cloud/releases/release-notes-2020.md's
"redact-log" (a literal config-item name kept in English, not a mistranslation).
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Found by a deep 1:1 re-review against English:
- clinic/clinic-user-guide-for-tiup.md and clinic/quick-start-with-clinic.md:
a pre-existing missing を before ご覧ください on the line this PR already
touches (EN: "For more information, see [log redaction](...)").
- log-redaction.md: three occurrences of "redact"/"redaction" that were still
mistranslated as 編集 ("edit") outside the originally-searched pattern
("all logs ... are redacted" -> すべてのログが編集されます; "customize the
redaction rules" x2 -> 編集ルール). Fixed to 秘匿化 to match the rest of the
now-corrected page.
What is changed, added or deleted? (Required)
The English term "log redaction" (masking sensitive data in logs) was machine-translated as ログ編集 / ログの編集, which literally means "log editing" — a false-friend mistranslation that loses the security/masking meaning. The docs already use the correct term 秘匿化 for redaction elsewhere (e.g.
tidb-cloud-auditing.md), so this unifies log-redaction usage to match it:ログ編集/ログの編集→ログの秘匿化編集機能→秘匿化機能(intidb-cloud-log-redaction.md)編集済みログファイル→秘匿化されたログファイル(EN: "Redacted Log Files")監査ログの編集をサポートします→監査ログの秘匿化をサポートします(EN: "Support audit log redaction")Scope: 45 changes across 18 files, including
log-redaction.mdandtidb-cloud/tidb-cloud-log-redaction.md(headings + body), inbound links fromTOC.md,encryption-at-rest.md,system-variable-reference.md,pd-configuration-file.md,tikv-configuration-file.md,tiflash/tiflash-configuration.md,scheduling-configuration-file.md,tso-configuration-file.md, clinic guides,basic-features.md,tidb-cloud/features.md, and several release notes.Anchors are English-derived and left unchanged; only the visible heading text and its inbound link text change together, so links keep resolving.
Left unchanged (verified correct as-is):
tidb-cloud/essential-database-audit-logging.md's "監査ログの編集" (EN: "Edit audit logging") is genuinely about editing audit-log settings, not redaction — not a mistranslation.Which TiDB version(s) do your changes apply to? (Required)
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